first try of comic....

hmmm.....i know, it sounds stopid if i say im not yet happy with it...i ifnd something is not too good in it....

i tried now a kind of comic , but i have to find a way to improve the speech balloon , its to hard in this work.....

already i tihnk the colours i should take, alothguh next time i do then harder to see more difference...

thats funny, often i want to start a story, i have to draw the first important scene how you see....normally i wouldnt show it until im ready with the rest, but bec i will need much time (i dont have to much..this is form weekend..so i ithnk its ok if i already show the first made page...(but i ithnk with story you wouldnt miss too much,....i always have the stupid "one way" or cheap kind stories which tries faast to lead to the main interest....)

hope you can enjoy it....

good day to all,

greetings, blnm